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Please note, the topics on the page are designed primarily for SCC Annual Scholarships. However, you can adapt the information to other applications as well. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to our office! You can visit us in E-104or give us a call at (714) 628-4702. ​

A Simple Start to Writing an Autobiographical
or Personal Essay for Scholarships
 
DOs & DON'Ts
The intent of the autobiographical or personal essay is to allow the scholarship committee to know you better. It is not easy to stare at a blank page and know, where to begin? What to include? What not to include? If you are feeling stuck, consider these three suggestions:

  • DO NOT start your essay with information that can be found elsewhere on your application or transcript. Try not to repeat information that the scholarship committee has already reviewed.
  • DO consider starting with a quotation that is meaningful to you, or a familiar saying that guides you. This will help focus your writing on what is important to you.
     
  • DO talk about your goals, past achievements, past failures and what you learned from them. You can also highlight volunteer or work experiences, campus involvement, and/or relationships that have guided your development as a student.

 
START WITH AN OUTLINE 
Begin drafting your personal essay with a simple outline. You can write paragraphs about each main point by adding examples and supporting statements. Here is a sample outline:

I. Who are you?

Personal Characteristics

  • Strengths & weaknesses
  • Obstacles overcome or currently confronting

Educational and Career Goals

  • Why have you selected your major?
  • What is your ultimate educational goal - A.A., B.A., M.A., or Ph.D.?
  • What are your career aspirations?
  • How will your education assist you in achieving your career goals?

Important Involvement/Activities

  • What are you involved with, and why are these activities important to you?
  • How are you involved?

Leadership

  • Where do you show your leadership – on campus, at work, in an organization?
  • Include examples that highlight your leadership skills

II. Why should you be awarded this scholarship?

  • What do you have to offer the donor: Are they making an investment in a successful, contributing member of society? Will you be a good example or role model to others in your community?
  • ​How will you use the scholarship?  Rather than saying, "I need the money," tell the selection committee how it will help further your ​education. For example, you might write "This scholarship will be used to purchase the extra supplies needed especially for my major," or; "In addition to assisting with tuition and fees, I hope that being awarded this scholarship recognition could also enhance my application for an internship in my field of study."  

​III. Write an opening paragraph, and a closing paragraph​​

  • ​​​Now that you have a draft of your essay, make sure you have an opening paragraph introducing your theme or thoughts, and a closing paragraph concluding that theme or thoughts. This will help your essay read like a well-framed message, and not a string of different items with no framework holding it together. ​  ​​

​ ​​ IV. Proofread. Wait 24-hours -- then proofread again!

  • ​​​It is amazing how quickly you can catch a misspelling or typo the next day. Give yourself time to check your essay one last time. ​

​ ​V. Submit your essay and application -- Good Luck!​

Scholarship applications may require applicants to include one or more personal references, or letters of recommendation. A personal reference or letter of recommendation is a formal statement from someone professional who knows you (the applicant) and can describe your qualities and achievements for consideration. Typically, this is a non-family member, and someone who has experience with your work ethic, leadership experiences, and personal characteristics. For example, references and letters of recommendation could be written by an instructor, school advisor, community leader, or employer. 

The SCC Online Scholarship Application allows students to list the name and email address of their references directly on the application. To be considered for a scholarship, students must provide a minimum of one, and up to three references on the SCC Online Scholarship Application.

Private or corporate scholarships processed outside of the campus may have different requirements for personal references or letters of recommendation. Be sure to read all instructions carefully before submitting your application.

Tips
1. Before asking someone to provide a reference or letter of recommendation, be sure they know you well enough to talk about your character and abilities.
An instructor who has only known you for one semester may not be able to provide a well-rounded picture of your qualities, or be able to highlight your non-academic accomplishments. Try to ask someone who has enough knowledge of your work ethic and character to write a compelling recommendation.

2. Ask politely, and don't put them "on the spot."
If possible, speak with the individual in person to explain why you are requesting a reference or letter of recommendation. You want them to feel comfortable providing this for you. When speaking with them, be sure to discuss:

  • Why you are requesting the letter
  • Relevant information about the scholarship and the criteria you meet
  • Let them know to whom the letter should be addressed
  • Provide the application deadline*

3. *Give the author plenty of time to write the reference or recommendation.
Telling someone on Wednesday that you need their recommendation by Friday can put unreasonable and excessive pressure on them, and a hastily written letter of recommendation or reference may not serve you well. It is appropriate to give the author at least two weeks to deliver a recommendation on your behalf. When you give a person ample time to "sing your praises" it can really make a difference in the quality of the letter they are able to compose for you

4. Ask the author if they would mind being a reference for future applications?
The SCC Online Application requires a minimum of one, and up to three references for all scholarships listed. But, will you be applying for more scholarships outside of the SCC campus? This will mean that each reference or letter of recommendation might need modifications to fit the criteria of each particular scholarship. If you let the author know in advance that there may be additional applications that you would like to use their reference for, they will appreciate your consideration of their time and effort.

5. Say Thank You!
The person who writes your letter of recommendation is using their personal time and effort to promote your success. Regardless of whether or not you are awarded a scholarship, a sincere thank you note goes a long way to maintaining a positive relationship between you and the author of your recommendation. Knowing that you appreciate their time and consideration can be its own reward.

  • Learn more about scholarships offered at Santiago Canyon College by clicking here
  • The U.S. Department of Education has great resources and information for students looking for scholarships outside of their educational institution. Click here for details.
  • The U.S. Department of Labor has a scholarship search database that includes opportunities from across​ the nation! Click here to search now. ​